Improve Your Selective Writing in 30 Seconds

Vocabulary is mostly precise and appropriate for the task with some ambitious words like ‘fervently’ and ‘insurmountably’. The style is mostly consistent and appropriate, though some phrases are awkward or repetitive.

• Try to avoid awkward or incomplete phrases like ‘friendship is and friends give a sense of belonging’ by proofreading carefully.
• Use synonyms or pronouns to avoid repeating the word ‘friends’ too often, e.g. ‘they’ or ‘companions’.
• Work on sentence fluency by combining short sentences for a smoother style, e.g. ‘Friends help you when you need it and can cheer you up when you are sad.’

The essay shows a range of sentence types and lengths with mostly good control. Some sentences are simple or repetitive, and a few could be combined for better flow.

• Try combining short sentences to create more complex and varied sentence structures, e.g. ‘Friends help you when you need it and can cheer you up when you are sad.’
• Work on varying sentence openings to avoid repetition, for example, start some sentences with adverbs or phrases.
• Check for sentence fragments or incomplete ideas and fix them for clarity.

Basic punctuation like commas and full stops are mostly correct, but there are errors such as missing commas after introductory phrases and incorrect semicolon use.

• Add commas after introductory phrases like ‘In conclusion’ to improve clarity.
• Avoid using semicolons incorrectly, as in ‘insurmountabl;y’.
• Check for missing commas in compound sentences to separate ideas clearly.

There are several spelling errors including ‘insurmountabl;y’, ‘Thereforer’, ‘calear’, and ‘friendfs’ which distract from the writing but do not severely impede understanding.

• Carefully check and correct spelling errors like ‘insurmountabl;y’ → ‘insurmountably’.
• Use a dictionary or spellchecker to help with tricky words like ‘therefore’ and ‘clear’.
• Practice writing tricky words slowly and carefully to remember correct spellings.